Pending Open KingFox's Character App - Thomas Twilight

This application is pending further details. Please review the comment posted by a staff member with the heading "Pending" as it will contain the information required for the application to be further evaluated.
This is an open application. This means that it has been recently submitted by the player and is waiting to reviewed.
KingFox

KingFox

New member
Member
Minecraft Username
KingFox

Discord Name and Identifier
Bluefox

Have you played any previous iteration(s) of Patriam?
(DID NOT ANSWER QUESTION)

Please select (if any) the Patriam documents which you have read
General Policies

Do you have a previously approved character application?
No

Name of Character?
Angus

What is your character's age?
19

What is the chosen House of your Character?
Kaegorin

What religion is your character?
N/A

Does your character have any relations to other existing characters?
No

Does your character hold any roleplay titles, ranks, jobs, etc. ingame?
Yes

Please list the titles, ranks, jobs, etc. separated by a comma
King of Cazenovia

I agree to create a reasonable backstory for my character within the policies of Patriam.
Yes

Provide your character's backstory
Angus was taken away at a young age, by haensaar warriors, he was descended from a noble bloodline in Kaegorin, leaving a claim to the throne. The Haensaar soldiers wanted to use that against the Kaegorin, and make Angus one of their own. They invaded in the middle of the night, leaving Cazanovia to have no heir as Haensaar warriors killed thier king, leaving Cazanovia to struggle with leadership. Meanwhile Haensaar warriors had brought Angus forward to a chief who planned to use him as a bargaining chip against Kaegorin. Years later he managed a escape from his captors and returned to his home of Cazanovia to find a democratic party was taking control, he would still be crowned king but his leadership would allready be in question.

I swear that all answers are unplagiarized and agree to follow the rules above regarding my submission.
Yes
 
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Pending*​

This is your second application and is a borderline rejection.
Once again, your name cannot include any irl words or be an irl name.

Additionally, your backstory needs to either have a lot more depth or be more realistic. It is highly unlikely that a Haensaar would be able to just walk into a Kaegorin City State and simply be proclaimed King for seemingly no reason.

If you intend to apply for a City State then you must be able to prove that you understand the rules and requirements, thus far you have not shown this.

Please review your application and make the necessary changes or it will be rejected.
 
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